Tupelo 30/30 Fundraising Project: Second Heroic Crown: "The Warsaw Crown"

I'm writing a poem a day for thirty days, part of Tupelo Press' 30/30 Project.

Not only have I taken the challenge of writing thirty poems in thirty days, but I've also added to the challenge by writing two heroic crowns of sonnets, the first heroic crown (entitled "Janus Words) having been finished yesterday. Now I'm starting on the second crown, which I'm entitling "The Warsaw Sonnets." They are for my wife's family in Warsaw, Indiana, and are taken from prompts of local/folk words that come from that corner of the country. Please look to those poems and other poets' work here.

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Warsaw, Indiana.

 

T H E  W A R S A W  C R O W N

Copyright © J. Kirk Maynard 2013

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II. i. [will it play in Peoria?]

Here is a crossroad set, a circumstance :

thin line of was to what ifs is given

a harder back, stiff legs country-driven

or brought to ear in mean sustenance

and discount sales. The smooth open bay

of moon in pasture on a thin grey road,

sharpened silence written only as owed,

the question to ask this crown : will it play

in Peoria? Here are my short words

to find a journey made at left or right

turns : a poem to craft a country lane.

Within the dust and ears of corn and soy,

a whispered tongue invisible, and cloys

the lyric pastoral, the mouthing grain.

II. ii. [corny]

The lyric, pastoral, the mouthing grain

jumps the crown twice in unfruit-filled relish.

The first is vegetable. What’s nourished gains

in teeth kernaling through the buttered flesh,

sound-smack the muggy air of summer once

removed. The second is internal rhyme,

to stories played in pastor’s abundance,

for how to make holy water? In time

you boil the hell out of it. Corny

is what it’s called when it sticks to your teeth,

when you gum past the prayers a stormy

mind set and settling still the rind beneath.

The well-spoke spatter of flesh and word

makes her round-up cozy in winter whorled.

II. iii. [cherry bounce]

Makes her round up cozy in winter whorled,

a cough corrupting the once silent house

through din of den T.V. Who needs a dose

of Grandma’s medicine, of bourbon curled

in fruit and kept in the kitchen’s cabinet.

She calls it cherry bounce. It’s ages old,

smelling of gas light and a country told

to fend for itself, be compassionate,

and build your home. The jar in quiet rest

is briefly pulled to rise and warm the chest

within, but more is wrought, a circumstance :

a memory of warmth and care and love

cupped in temperance, a sort of sin of

utility, a sneaking decadence.

II. iv. [farmer’s turn]

Utility a sneaking decadence,

there’s the straight line of road and here’s the turn,

here’s where the speed of fifty-five adjourns

unless the farmer may through excellence

he to the opposing lane, drives himself.

We are free to carry on at a speed

lifted by a consummate caring creed

of respected manners, of witnessed selves

and approaching windmills. The open road,

sought by opening at the farmer’s turn,

the bleeding broken line’s a farmer’s tool,

and the yellow markings a transit code.

What sense of goodness reigns and generates

a road where traffic all accelerates!

II. v. [whistle pig]

A road where traffic all accelerates,

a land still serene in the dusty air :

hides opossums, hides decorate deer

the space between highways, a venerate

menagerie, even the raccoon stalks

the wood bins snow-side a snuffling gruff,

the foxes and frogs, whistle pig in slough

or creek or to hibernate under rocks.

The air is silent calm, muggy summer,

kids play tag beneath the yellow poplar,

the whistle pig whistles out a warning :

man is in the forest. Come close to dirt,

dig beneath their findings into warm earth.

There they live all giddy in conforming.

II. vi. [Hoosier]

There they live all giddy in conforming
to shadows wrought by crossroad rearings
impulses turned in tune to deer clearings,
The wholesome Rockwell, the roomy warming

up of Hoosier. The old man drove his hog
as far west as Sante Fe and saw
The southwest, as far ground as he could claw.
The blessing first as a Hoosier, he prologued,

was to be one. The second was the getting out.
His mouth's mustache trembles in a split shout
of laughter, nods. Proud to be serene.

 If I could live again said he musing,
The only laugh-loud bang I'd set fusing
I'd imprint Hoosier on someplace obscene.

II. vii. [snipe hunting]

I'd imprint Hoosier to someplace obscene,
a chicken ranch, perhaps a coughing up
of caterwauling to stranger's gulling gulps,
the snipe hunting when snipe is just a screen

for me. I’ve been duped to camouflage,
a secret untethered lies in my chest,
cared by false curiosity at best,
at worst a grown man swept in sabotage.

Your love was best for the startling,
for windows unforeseen at first second look,
my first look twice I could not see the trick

of your two eyes hunting for mine halting :
when you said here's a trick I might have took,
the snipe you've sought I've led to lead you quick.

II viii [clink of glass]

The snipe you've sought I've led to lead you quick
To counterment, cold and calculated
The bride and groom sit in first vows sated,
Till clink of glass rings and lips must kiss

Or the ringing perpetuates. We were wedded
In vibration, the audience
To sound in certain ticklish ambiance
And trapped by tapping knives in embedded

Rhythms of love. O Jessica, I hear
Each ring as I awake and find you near
The noise an infectious sound of devotion :

You are made of champagne flutes awry,
A dear dear sound I set my love by,
To love the glass that caught the promotion.

II. ix. [Restart your Engines]

To love the glass that caught promotion,

a sure bet, an open commotion,

the less for land open and brightly lit,

From Midwest to Pacific now I sit

and dream of better poems than this.

The hours we spent just now to this,

a sitting after long days in Missoula,

means my mind is wiped of cadence or rhyme.

Let’s follow the Indiana slogan :

to restart your engines! and get going

tomorrow, with a better poem than this.

For now I’ll spend the last hours of day

with you rather than writing away

at rhythms when thrown forever miss!

II. x. [outer road]

At rhythms when thrown forever miss

main stream meandering or they seem posed,

in the outer road I drive to transpose

the main from mean, what speeding signs dismiss

and carefully select the ground to topic on.

Was it that you too, shook to see up close

what stranger ways a gravelling road shows?

Our mutual winding was toward us drawn?

I think we’ll find in frontage roads a home

to stand nearby the main for those that roam :

the picture window dream without the ritz.

We need it now more than before, what seems

a stranger’s road opens in sun caught sheens,

toward periphery, toward forgotten glitz.

II. xi. [barn burner]

Toward periphery. Toward forgotten glitz,

what is earliest love but a real barn burner?

From the compass, two opposing points

one city rhyme, one country song, sterner

than can agree the continent divides.

We reel between the two, a love of long

distance and the close proximic street slides.

This is what’s keeping us a heavy run :

the days we drive past corn and close cropped fields,

the nights we heel-clap the concrete even,

in better burgs, empty mill towns, crop yields,

yields sway to stay being alive, breathing.

Jess, if we ever from this hot love hiss,

let’s remember the continent’s a kiss.

II. xii. [knee high by the fourth of July]

Let’s remember the continental kissed

interior, and drives itself up high :

in county Kosciusko summer’s sky

distant dealing in constant crushing, this

requires literal measurements made.

What miles when and readings taken in,

the figure-face, supposéd how and when

distorts the sensibilities and aids

tomfoolery. One conjecture is owned,

for farmers often may to one intone

knee high by the fourth of July.

How to measure knee? How to measure corn?

This thumbed rule is one that is not scorned,

sights to guide all literal others by.

II. xiii. [angel]

Sights to guide all literal others by

resemblance struck, by pure lightning chance:

the hobos say an angel hovers a glance

without recompense asked, nor neither sighs

nor feels disgraced. Sometimes I'm silly-spoke,

a glib word said like footsteps on the track,

the lonesome quietude opens : I'm back

to feeling lost until you so invoke

the angel uncaring, allowed by sight

to stop my dumb phrasings in shallow light

of homeless verbs, of ill-begotten I's : 

seeking shelter in your moral compass,

my words aren't drunk that never can cut less

than true, your voice is home and I comply.

II. xiv. [smelling the barn]

Then, true, your voice is home and I comply, 

then home is the sweet stable smell snifted,

of smelling the barn, of low heads lifted : 

I am almost. Hard to see night's light by,

but by and by the surety sweet to say

these sonnets were honestly written here,

mincing words verbs subject I him you her,

day to day, and cheaply did rhyme give way

or tired I stopped taking care of it. 

Smelling the barn, I've taken to poor wit,

(anyways written an hour or less

of deadlined I, and deadlined my poor mind,

soon I'll be more blunt, leave sonnets behind,

each day a declaring of home's own bliss.

II. xv. [Warsaw, Indiana]

Here is a crossroad set : a circumstance,

the lyric, pastoral, the mouthing grain,

makes her round, cozy in winter’s whorled

utility, a sneaking decadence :

there we live all giddy in conforming

the imprint Hoosier to something obscene,

the snipe you’ve sought I’ve lead to lead you quick,

to love the glass that caught promotion

at rhythms. When thrown forever miss.

Toward periphery, toward forgotten glitz,

let’s remember the continent’s a kiss,

sights to guide all literal others by.

Than your true voice is home and I comply :

each day a declaring of home's own bliss.

Without Puck, Interlude/Soliloquy : On Obssession

I dreamed a friend passed me in the street, Roosevelt Avenue, Queens, right under the F train; and said to me that I was wrong about the first two parts of this essay. I awoke considering the nature of obsession.

Here are some preliminary thoughts on obsession and enchantment:

1) Vladimir Nabokov, in his autobiography Speak, Memory, referred to Lolita as (to paraphrase) a long and painful birth. No doubt there was inspiration for the characters, and we even get a hint to a girl Nabokov met in the Crimea that might been the seed for the pederast Humbert's own obsession.

To speak nothing of Nabokov's own obsession, does Lolita, for the author and Humbert, qualify as an enchanter? I don't think so.

James Mason as Humbert Humbert in Stanley Kubrick's Lolita (1962)

2) Obsession is the enchantment's Janus-face. It, too, can take over a poet. I'm willing to say it has to do with the self enchanting the self: spell-caster & spell-bound. Obsession has less to do with external forces, although the impetus can be there. Obsession is usually premised with an incantation of self.

2a) Consider our enchanted Salem. The spell casters were external: Tituba and Goody Martin, only to name two. There were many more besides: almost anyone can cast a spell, can cause the enchantment to occur. The afflicted girls, the hallucinations of John Kembal, these were enchantments. They were cast by the incantation, brought externally into the internal workings ("afflictions") of the enchanted. Soon all of Salem was enchanted. It exceeded itself, it even found itself "afflicted" or "possessed." I would even say to some extent obsession became evident. Obsession, perhaps, was found in the religious leaders. We might be able to argue that Cotton Mather became obsessed by this, since he viewed all from a distance, his incantation might have been driven by himself. This is merely conjecture.

3) Dick Hugo: "We create our prisons and we earn parole each poem." (Letter to Birch from Deer Lodge)

4) In my dream, it wasn't the spirit of my friend calling to say you've forgotten about x and y, it was my own mind signalling to me. That is the creation by the self, the incantation of the self, the spell cast on the self. Poetry, too, can be like this, although I see some elementary dichotomies at play here.

4a) The enchanted/obsessed binary is linked to the binary set out by Lorca: the Muse and Duende. The muse is external to the poet, the sublime speaking into the poet's ear, the poet an enchanted vessel. The Duende is a demon-spirit, housed in the bowels of the poet, rising up out of the poet's own unconscious, being vomited forward. The Duende is a creation of the self, not always such a darkness as I have painted it, but a being that doesn't hold the heavenly or sublime light of the Muse and the Angel.

4b) The poet struck by the Muse is often found in address: the apostrophe is in use. "Sing to me, O muse" is the daily prayer of this poet. Not to say all poems that lack the expressive "O" are without the muse. Whitman's poem in the last segment shows the enchanted, in this case the Astronomer and the stars are the expressive "O," they are the external force.

4c) Likewise, the address can be made without realization that the obsessed is addressing himself. Consider Humbert's first spell-casting:

"Lolita, light of my life, fire of my loins. My sin, my soul. Lo-lee-ta. The tip of the tongue taking a trip of three steps down the palate to tap, at three, on the teeth. Lo. Lee. Ta." (Nabokov)

Here is Humbert's incantation, to himself. The Lolita which has a self is lost in the mouth of Humbert's incantation, becomes broken into pieces of sound. It is not Lolita who makes the incantation: she is Humbert's self-incantation. She does not enchant: he is already enchanted. It is a self enchantment: it is an obsession.

4d) To take another example of a character obsessed: who does Eliot's Prufrock really address if not himself -- or the self in visage? Prufrock enchants himself firstly, and then proceeds to enchant the rest of us; even Eliot is not immune. Prufrock is born of Eliot's mind, an obsessed Self actualized.

4e) With Humbert and Prufrock: they can and do enchant us. That is what the obsessed poet accomplishes. If the enchanted poet is able to spread the Word, the obsessed poet manages to spread the self. We actualize, we play accomplice.

5) I knew a boy of seventeen, who fell deeply in love with a girl the same age. They were both young and new to experience, but the girl had a better grasp on the realities of the world than the boy had. She had been visited by a demon, we'll call it Loss, early in life, when her parents had divorced. So the demon Loss was not a new thing in her life, and, like a second child, when each new Loss came they all became easier to carry.

Everyone carries Loss around, sometimes many Losses. Sometimes the burden of Loss can be too much. Most of us manage to find a way to let it sit inside us without it bothering us too much. A new Loss comes around and we manage to shift the other Losses around so as to make more room. Sometimes a particular Loss just leaves, and we come to forget its face, and we wonder what we were so upset with in the first place.

When the boy and girl were twenty, the girl broke things off, and the boy bore the first Loss he had had to deal with. And the boy tucked away that Loss, let it nest in his heart. He took Loss hard, is what I mean to say. Loss breathed fire into his ventricles and arteries until the breath of Loss tingled down every nerve in his body. It was wholly pathetic to watch.

Why this anecdote is particular is that the boy had been enchanted with the girl, but when the girl left she did not leave by still enchanting; instead, the boy allowed himself to be enchanted with his own Loss. This was obsession. This is the obsession of love unrequited: it is not the beloved, but the lover, the lover enchanted with the idea of Love or the idea of Loss, each one equally within the self enchanted.

That Loss that came from the girl eventually grew old and died. The boy also became older, learned to hold greater Losses at greater distances. Deaths of friends and family made the First Loss go to seed. It isn't that the First Loss is gone, for it could sprout from some organ of the boy at any time. For now, it lays buried, with a hard frost atop it.

Without Puck, part 2: Enchantment

So much for the incantation.

The incantation is the thing that connect the physical object to the metaphysical or unconscious or subterranean world. For John Kembal it was Goody Martin's declaration "I'll give you puppies enough!" that led to the inebriated hallucinations. It is when someone hums the first two lines of "You Are My Sunshine" (or just happens to write it in a blog), and there the song stays in the mind, irritatingly permanent. The words invoke, but the enchantment is entirely of the subject's, not the enchanter's, doing.

Marion Starkey tells us that the Salem witch trials began due to the tendency of girls in Puritan culture--girls on the verge of adulthood, who were, in Starkey's words were "without Puck"; and could not find relief, especially in winter, for their energies and imaginations--that these girls were, essentially, bored. Their angst had not the outlet we have today: to scream out of fast moving car windows, to dance, et cetera. In lieu of any avenue for imaginative retreat (which was repressed out of society, in the sense that most other books and stories were falsehoods and therefore in the Devil's domain), Abigail Williams (only eleven, whatever Miller writes) and the rest of the girls found a new sanctuary in the stories and ju-ju of Tituba, who spent all winter weaving tales and incantations across and around them.

This scene is as much an internal creation as it is an external force.

When they were discovered, this much we know, every bit of those repressed energies was harnessed and ready to explode. The girls, without an imaginative or creative outlet, and the ability to become outrageously excited, became "the afflicted girls." They were overtaken: it is important to note that it was not a spell but their own enchantment: that Tituba merely made an incantation, not a spell. The spell was owned entirely by the girls.

Likewise, when the region came to be possessed with what can only be described as Lust in condemning witches, it was not the afflicted girls who enchanted, but rather the townspeople's own conscious and unconscious behaviors. The town began to create a reality, possessed with the imaginative spirit of Lucifer first (and God, ironically, only secondary, in that it was God's work to capture and kill any witch in their midst), and the reality was autonomous to any real enchanter. It cannot be blamed of the girls entirely that the judges condemned the witch, just like it cannot be blamed on the witch that the girls were able to create such real harm to themselves, pain that they truly believed in.

Puritan Massachusetts fell into chaos. Witches were found in all corners of the villages. A woman walking past one of the afflicted might cause for no reason she could see real harm to the afflicted girl. But the witch did not do the harm: it was the girl's imagination. Once the incantation takes place, it is only upon the enchanted to continue the spell, which is a kind of a metaphysical reinterpretation of Eleanor Roosevelt's famous quote, "no one can make you feel in inferior without your consent." And there were choices involved, to the self-enchanted. As much as the world seemed to be full of external forces, it was instead internal creation and imagination.

In poetry, then, the incantation releases the poem, the craft, into the waters of the imagination. But it is the reader or reciter of poetry who allows that poem to grow. In this sense, I can think of poem after poem that has lingered in my head without stop, entirely enchanting me but of my own enchantment. To another, it would appear boring, it would not have the effect. But this type of enchantment does recall to mind a poem by Walt Whitman:

When I Heard the Learn'd Astronomer.

When I heard the learn'd astronomer ; 
When the proofs, the figures, were ranged in columns before me ; 
When I was shown the charts and the diagrams, to add divide, 
      and measure them ; 
When I, sitting, heard the astronomer, where he lectured with                   
      much applause in the lecture-room,
How soon, unaccountable, I became tired and sick ;
Till rising and gliding out, I wander'd off by myself,
In the mystical moist night-air, and from time to time
Look'd up in perfect silence at the stars.

The simplicity of meaning, almost an insurrectionary impulse in the speaker to resist science for the sublimity of the natural world, is complicated by the fact that the speaker had nevertheless "heard the learn'd astronomer." The words had been spoken, and spoken again, into the poem. The enchantment is upon the speaker, and is the speaker's enchantment, the astronomer's lecture. The lecture reprints itself onto the night sky. The silence of the stars includes the lecture of the astronomer. There is no separating the two. And it is not the astronomer that enchants the night sky, but rather the enchanted, writing the lecture into the sky. 

In Whitman's poem, the external forces may seem to be the Astronomer and Nature. But Whitman internalizes both, by making them equal subjects of the poem. They are projected out in an act of creation, harmless of course (not at all as dangerous as Abigail Williams' projections) because they have enchanted, and the enchanter must act. The poet is always the enchanted object trying to release the spell from himself.

Without Puck, part 1: Incantation

There is a case to be made that the fantastical should notbe ignored. Even if modern technological advances have smoothedout the supernatural or religious contours of the human imagination, childrenstill believe there are monsters in the closet.

That’s because there are monsters in the closet. If we wantthere to be.

Cover of "Wonderland" series -- David Mack, artist

An anxiety edging its way to the hegemonic front can be seenin two comic book series. The first is by Mike Carey, called The Unwritten, theother is the ninth season of Joss Whedon's Buffy the Vampire Slayer, in which all magic hasbeen destroyed and locked out of the world. In both comics the creative forces that are connected to the world (in Carey's a giant fish called Leviathan; in Whedon's world, magic) have been somehow severed. It should be noted that in both cases the severing was violent. It requires violence to sever the imagination from the mind. This violent act has left the world without dreams. Suicide rates are up, creativity is down. In the words of Willow (who had her own spectacular five-part comic in which she tries to rectify this problem), Buffy's wiccan sidekick, "no one can hit a note, everyone's auto-tuned."

In Carey and Whedon's world, the link is the incantation. The incantation, the words to create the spell, to create the fiction, to make it physical, to make the link occur. 

There are supernatural causes to these problems, and in these comic book series there can be supernatural solutions. In a way their creations show the reverse of that cultural anxiety: the fact that these two can create a world threatened by the disappearance of creativity is proof the imagination in our culture is far from tapped. But it is nonetheless an anxiety that corresponds to our "end of days" anxiety. Not only will the world be zombified, it already is.

A society we could be paralleling ourselves to (I see this is a grandiose statement, but I'm inclined to make it and hope you are generous to me) is Puritan Salem in 1692. Here, as Marion Starkey wrote in her book "The Devil in Massachusetts," the people of Salem, denying the "natural outlet in Robin Goodfellows and in fiddling and dancing around the maypole," had focused its repressed imaginations into dark accusations of witchcraft to a number of goodwives. One of them, Susanna Martin, had been assumed to have her exploits in witchcraft, and was "something of a Paula Bunyon among witches" to the townsfolk. As early as 1669 she had been accused of witchcraft.

One of the best stories of Susanna Martin was how John Kembal had been harassed by metaphysical dogs while walking home from the fields. Earlier in the day, Kembal had visited Goody Martin with the intention of buying the litter her bitch had just had. When he decided against buying the litter, Susanna "was wroth. [. . .] 'I'll give you puppies enough!" she cried after him. And indeed she did."

That evening Kembal was visited by the apparitions of puppies as "he came out to the road near the meetinghouse." When he tried to kill the first puppy with an ax, it disappeared. Farther along, a "Thing" awaited him, "a larger puppy, black as coal and vicious. It sprang for his throat, his belly . . ." Kembal swung with his ax wildly and it finally disappeared when he called out Jesus' name. 

That's some good incantation. Of course, the pailfuls of beer the kitchen maid brought to Kembal on the field might have created the physical manifestation: so it is unclear who we should thank for the supernatural story: the witch, the farmer, or the beer. It would be best perhaps to put value on all three. As for Goody Martin, who was executed on July 19th, 1692, although it was she who made the incantation, it is unclear whether it was herself proper or Kembal's vague idea of her as "witch" that is to blame for the apparitions. 

The incantation, in poetry, is the bucket that dips into the imaginative well. It is the first light found in a dark room. It lights. The child says "monster," and the clothes in the closet begin to shift. 

Take, for example, a poem by Brenda Hillman from Practical Water (Wesleyan, 2009)

"In The Trance"

A pretty anarchist said to me

It's not that a great love happens

what happened became your great love

Her echo had an ancient glow & so

proved buoyant for my little craft

I left the world & felt the world

The bee loading it gloves with powder

The albatross wanting one thing from the sea

Nothing can wreck our boat said she

& when the water felt the glacier

The future held a present tense

The present held a future without cease

Like Goody Martin incantation to John Kembal's visions, what the anarchist says "proved buoyant for [the speaker's] little craft". The craft is two-fold: a vessel and an art. As a vessel, the incantation releases it into the world. As an art, it is the bucket dipping into the well and the poem is what is drawn. John Kembal's craft was metaphysically his imagination, and physically the beer. 

Every morning should come with an incantation. Each morning we should write in the declarative, and watch out for how the incantation shapes the day. This is about being aware and not: allowing our unconscious mind to do a lot of work so our physical reality can manifest itself into the supernatural. Then we'll write about it.